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Max's Dark Side

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Max’s Dark Side

*Part 2 of ‘Austin Mahone is Too Nice’*


“Are you kidding me?”

“No, it’s right here.”

Max opened the door to an indoor gym in house. Austin Mahone stood there amazed at the fact that this shy guy has his own basketball court in his house. He looked towards Max and said:

“Why don’t you have friends again?”

“Well umm because…” Max gave Austin a whole list of reasons why everybody he meets takes advantage of him. Austin felt sorry for bringing it up.

“Hey, what’d I say about being depressing.”

“Oh, yeah sorry.”

The boys walked in the indoor basketball court. They were wearing sneakers, shorts, and t-shirts.

“Alright so let’s play.” Austin said grabbing a basketball from the ball pen. Max looked scared and confused.

“Wait, no. I can’t. I suck at this. I just wanted to show you this.”

“Aww come on, it’s still raining, and I think this is the perfect time to teach you.” Austin said with a very convincing tone. Max finally agreed to try to play. Austin was very patient about teaching Max how to even use a basketball. Basically Max was the definition of a geek when it came to sports, just like his manager had informed him before. After about half an hour Max seemed to run out of energy fast, whereas hyper Austin was ready for more. He passed Max the ball but he didn’t realize how fatigue he was.

Max somehow managed to catch the ball but feel back and tripped into a pile of gym equipment such as dumbbells, balls, and mats. Austin could not hold in his laughter.

“Haha come on man you got to be a little more coordinated than that.” Austin snickered.

“Yeah I’m ok thanks for asking. You know…what the.” Max suddenly noticed that he was trapped. His arms were spread out but were trapped underneath. He wasn’t being crushed but he could only move his legs and could not move up. Austin quickly noticed that Max wasn’t getting up and ran over to the crash site.

“Hehe you ok man?” Austin said after laughing at Max’s position.

“Oh yeah I’m just fineee.” Max replied with a sarcastic tone. Mahone did not appreciate the sarcasm and then his evil brain kicked in. He was going to take advantage of the situation. He approached Max and kneeled down next to him.

“Oh you’re just fine. For a second there I thought you were stuck. Well since you’re just fine. You probably won’t mind if I do this. Austin said while positioning himself to sit on Max’s waist. Max was confused but extremely nervous because Austin had an evil grin on his face.

“Uh wh-what are doing?” Max said slowly.

“Oh nothing, since your just fine this should be nothing to you.” Austin said. Just then he jabbed his fingers into Max’s armpits. Max was in both agony and horror.

“WHahahahahahahahahahaha nohohohohohohohohohohohohohohoho not this again PLEASHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHAHAHAHAHA.” Max could not believe that Austin would be evil enough to pull this off. Unfortunately Austin did not let up. Austin decided to pull up Max’s white t-shirt revealing a skinny flat body. After he pulled the shirt over Max’s head he noticed that Max had a birthmark near his belly button.

“Oh what’s this I see?”

Max saw that he was looking at his birthmark. He then had flashbacks of the horrors of his cousins pinning him down and tickling the area around his birthmark. “No, no don’t touch that. Please, please I’ll do anything.”
Once Austin heard that he became more evil-minded and gave Max a grin the size of the Grinch’s smile. He began poking the birthmark following by relentless tickling on his belly. “Nohohohohohohoho pleasseeeee sta stop ithahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha you’re evilllllhahahaha.”

“Oh that’s not a very nice thing to say. Now I have to teach you to respect you’re elders.” Austin said as he adjusted himself. He positioned himself to lie next to Max and his head was close to the trapped Max’s belly.

“N-no please not that. Why are you doing this Austin?”

“Well first of all you called me evil. Second you need more stamina, and since your trapped this is the only way to help you. Ready?” Austin started to attack Max’s belly with raspberries making sure to get the birthmark in his attack.

“NOOOO HOHOHOHOHOHOHOHo no-no more GAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PLEASE HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH I’ll GET YouHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO YOU AssshooolllleeeHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.”

Austin was shocked to hear such words from quiet Max. “He’s finally manning up.” He thought to himself. He stops tickling Max’s belly and watched him breathe air. He turn secretly saw that one of Max’s shoes had come flying off in his laughter. He decided to go in for the kill.

“Oh someone thinks he’s a tough guy huh. Well guess what, act like a tough guy, and get tickled like one.” Austin said as he moved down and restrained Max’s leg. Max finally noticed he was missing a shoe.

“Y-you wouldn’t.”

“Don’t worry I’m only doing one foot. It is just too perfect.”

Austin proceeds to lock the socked foot in place and started wiggling his fingers onto the foot. “NoHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO Austin STOOOP HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I CAN’T TAKE ITTTHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.”

“No this just won’t do. Too boring.” Austin said, shaking his head. After he was sure Max had caught his breath he began taking off the lonely white sock.

“NO please. Not the sock! WHY!?” Max yelled wiggling his foot as much as he could.

“Oh it’s just too boring. See I like crazy socks. I refuse to tickle a foot with a boring sock any longer. Austin said as he pulled off the sock. Max’s foot had a sweaty smell to it and yet was soft and wrinkled.

“No…th-this is just mean. It’s unfair.” Max said almost whimpering.

Austin laughed and started doodling on Max’s barefoot, making sure to play with the toes. “It’s your fault for getting yourself trapped.”

“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE THIS IS TORTUREREREHEHEHEHEHEHE come on enough GAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PLEASE PLEASE LET MEheheHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE GOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO.”

Austin was still tickling the foot when he thought to himself: “well since I have his foot here, can’t pass this up.” He leaned in to do the most evil thing to Max. He licked the sole of Max’s foot and continued for 10 minutes. At this point Austin was secretly enjoying the company of Max’s barefoot. He knew he was over doing it but it was just the “perfect foot” to him.

“NOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO NO NO LICKING HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOT AGAIN HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PLEASEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE ITS TOO MUCH HEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I CAN”T BREATHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE OH GODHAHAHAHAD”

Austin finally decided that Max was at his limit.

“Alright I think you’ve had enough. Come on.” Austin stopped and pulled the equipment that was trapping Max’s arms. Once Max got out he had a tired look on his face and was weak. Mahone helped him into his room.

Once inside Austin saw the Max’s room was cool and full of anything you’d expect from a gamer. Everything was organized well and he even has his own mini fridge. Austin laid Max down on his bed. Max fell asleep instantly.

“Aww poor guy.” Austin said. He pull off Max’s other sneaker and sock and covered him to sleep. He left and went into his guest room. He looked out the window to see that it was still raining. He put on some headphones and laid on his bed to listen to music. Staring at the rain though the window he fell asleep for a nap.



*1 Hour Later*



Austin woke up on the bed, yawned, and tried to get up. However he could not. He quickly noticed that he could not move, his arms were tied to the corners of the bed, legs were tied at the end but were separated a little, and he was still dressed in his clothes. He started wiggling but could not free himself from the colorful ribbons that tied his hands and feet.
There, Max was sitting in a chair smiling.

“Heeeeyyy Max. W-what is this.”

“You know your security personal took away and violent object or weapon of any kind. They’d never suspect a magic kit. You’re tied out by the ribbons you’d see clowns pull out endlessly.”

“Clever man. But why?”


“Payback Austin. Payback for earlier today.” Max said as he approach Mahone and sat next to him.

Austin was slightly panicking: “Come on man, we can talk this out. I’m sorry.”

“No way dude, you tickled me until I literally passed out. Now you’re about to get your just deserts. Isn’t this your philosophy? Hehe, ready pal?” Max said smiling evilly. He held up his hands in a claw form, over Austin’s sides, and began his assault.

“hahahahahaha hey come on hahahahahahaha we can workererehehehehehehehehehehe this out.” Austin was squirming while trying to dodge Max’s tickling fingers.

“What do you think we’re doing? I’m repaying you. It’s only fitting that you’re tied up seeing how I couldn’t move.”

Austin threw his head back on the pillow. “Aww come on. That was a just unlucky on your part, I couldn’t resist.”

Max frowned and pulled up Austin’s t-shirt over his head to expose Austin now bare upper body. He examined his target and felt jealous at Austin’s build at such a young age.

“Well aren’t you just a show off.”

Austin couldn’t help but giggle a little. But his moment was short lived because Max was drilling his fingertips into Austin’s armpits.

“GAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHEH STOP MAN HEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PLEAHEHEHEHEHEZE HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH NONONONONHOHOHO.”

“Aww is Mr. Mahone ticklish? Sucks not being able to move huh?”

“N- No man please.” Austin said after catching his breath. He was seeing a new side of Max. It was a more upbeat Max, but a little sadistic in Austin’s opinion. Max felt a new power in him. He set his sights on Austin’s belly.

“You seemed to enjoy tickling me here back at the gym, let’s see how you like it.” Max said as he squeezed Austin’s belly and even dipping his finger in his belly button.

“Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha no I don’t like it hahahahahahahaha I’m sorrweehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe no more hahahahahahahahahahahahaha.” Austin had never been in a situation like this: ‘I’ve created a monster’ he thought to himself.

Max wasn’t letting up at all. He adjusted himself so his head can be closer to his belly. “NO! NOT THAT!” Unfortunately for Austin, Max blew the biggest raspberries on his bare belly. This drove Austin crazy because his belly was one of his worst spots to tickle.

“No no no HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NO HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MAX NO HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.” Austin was feeling Max’s wrath at its worst. He was bucking so much you’d think he was being electrocuted. Max noticed that Austin was barely breathing so he gave him a brake.

“So your belly is ticklish too huh? Now you know how I felt.” Max said after sitting up.

“Oh man that was terrible. A-are you satisfied yet?” Austin said after gaining his composure.

Max smiled and said: “Not a chance bro. I feel like hearing you sing a bit more. Let’s explore shall we.”

Austin frowned and tried to wiggle himself free. Max knelt down by the stomach again only this time he went and tickled Austin’s flanks, lightly. By now Max had already concluded that Austin Mahone was in great shape; and that he is ticklish everywhere.

“Hey hahahahahahaha be careful hehehehehehehe.” Austin squeezed his eyes shut and laid trapped in a storm of ticklish payback.

“I am, I am. I think we need more laughing. Let’s try here.” Max moved downward and squeezed Austin’s thighs. Austin jolted in movement and in laughter. He didn’t expect Max to tickle him there; let alone actually be tickled there.


“DUDE HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA STOP HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA DONHOHOHOHOHOT ENOUGH HAHAHAHAHAHAHA HEY C’MON MAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAN TOO FAR HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE.” Max was surprised to get such a loud reaction but very pleased with the level of payback.

Poor Austin was at the breaking point, his cheeks became red, hair became wrinkled, and he felt like fainting. “Ok…Max…you gotta stop. I can’t take anymore.”  

Max gave Austin an evil grin and shook his head. “You unfairly tickled me into the point of me passing out on my bed. Since I have you tied to the bed, I’m not stopping until you pass out. There’s still one place we haven’t tickled. Apparently it’s our favorite place to tickle each other.”

Austin bit his lip and immediately started to struggle out of his bonds. Sure he was just tickled on his feet yesterday but Max was a new person today. His feet were about to get owned and he shivered in horror. Max walked down to the end of the bed in the guest room and knelt down in front of Mahone’s sneakers. He slapped one shoe and the thunderstorm exceed with a large BOOM. “Wow that made this more dramatic.” Max said looking out the window. Both boys managed to laugh; although Austin’s laugh was a little fainter. Despite the mood being lifted, Max proceed to take off Austin’s bright red sneakers and was greeted by black and red designed tube socks.

Max smiled while spidering his fingers all over Austin dark socked feet. “Hahahahahahaha aww man not thisisis hehehehehehehehehehe dude this is torture hahahahahahahahahahahahaha.”

“I know, isn’t it terrible.” Max said sarcastically, clearly feeling dominate over the pop singer. After 10 minutes he decided to pull off the tube socks which took a little while because he was scratching Austin’s bare foot slowly with every little pull.

“HAhahahahahaha your evil hehehehehehehehehe I should have never tickled you hahahahahahaha.” Austin giggled in remorse.

“Aww look at these sweaty feet. You know studies show sweaty feet tickle the worst.” Max said.

“This is not time to be a nerd haha.” Austin said wiggling his toes at Max.

“Oh it’s on Mahone.” Max said he grappled Austin’s feet and raked his fingernails all over the bare soles.

“OH GWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE HAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOT THE FEEHHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHET HAHAHAHAHAHA MAX PLEASE HAHAHAHAHAHAH MERCY.” Austin screamed in laughter as he pulled on the ribbons. Max was getting more devious.

“Let’s play a game man.” Max still has Austin’s bare feet in an arm lock. He gripped each toe one at a time singing ‘this little piggy,’ making sure to shove a finger in between each toes.

“Nohohohohohohohoh hahahahahahahaha AHH STOP HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YOU JERHERHERHERK I CAN’T BREATH HAHAHAHAHAHA.” Austin was practically dancing in his restraints. His big feet were at the mercy of Max. After a while Max stopped to massage Austin’s feet. Austin gulped and shook his head slowly because he knew what was coming. “No don’t Max. Please I’ll do anything. I’m sorry I did it to you. C’mon, we’re like bros now man. I love you like a brother now, please, no.”

“That was a beautiful speech. I love you like a brother now too but this must be done. Don’t worry our ticklishness will be our secret. Now brace yourself bro.” Max said right before licking Mahone’s bare feet with short rapid licks.

“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOOOHOHOHOHO DUDE HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA STOP LICKHIHING ME HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.”

Max wasn’t stopping anytime soon. He licked in between the singers toes getting the full taste of his feet.

“OH NO HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOT THE TOEHOHOHOHOHES ITS TORTURE HEHEHEHEHEHE AHH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PLEASE HEHEHEHEH HAVE MERCY ON MY FEEHEHEHEHET.” Austin was in tears and the bed was wrinkled beyond belief due to all the bucking. His cheeks were red and his chest was sweating.

“Hmm you’re still conscious. Not good enough.” Max got creative and started sucking some of Austin’s toes and starching one foot with his free hand. Poor Austin never saw it coming.

“HAHAHAHAHAHAH SHIT NOHOHOHOHOHOHO IT FEELS WEIRD MAN NOHOHHOHOHOH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I CANT TAKE IT PLEASHEHEHEHEHEHSE HAHAHAHAHAHAAHHA MAX IM SORRWEHEHEHEHEHEHE HAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHO.” After 15 minutes Max noticed the feet weren’t wiggling anymore. He looks at Austin and sees that he passed out. He looked at the time and said: “tough guy took 1 hour of tickling to pass out.”

Max untied his friend from the ropes and hides them back in his magic kit. He covered Austin with a blanket just as he did before and left him to sleep. He then sat and watched TV in his living room. “Wow it’s only Saturday, there’s still all day Sunday. I better be careful.” Max drifted off into another nap while listening to the rain.

He woke up soundly to see Austin watching TV on the recliner wearing his t-shirt, shorts, and still barefoot. Austin turned to Max and smile: “Hey what’s for-“

Max quickly curled up in panic. “D-Don’t hurt me, I’m sorry”

Austin laughed and walked up to Max and sat down next to him. “Aww, no I’m not mad. Just no more tickling got it?” He offered Max a handshake in truce. Max accepted. “So what’s for dinner?”

There was a laugh in the room and both boys went ahead to eat in Max’s fancy kitchen. Max felt like a new person. He felt more confident, although he decided he was never going to try sports again. And that was the end to a very long rainy Saturday for both teens, but it was a hell of a day.
Yeah I figured that in the sprits of squeals, I'd write the second part of the story of Max Evans and his new best friend Austin Mahone. I had a brilliant time writing this; and yes I like to pretend I'm British sometimes. Please, please enjoy :)
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XpavilioNx315's avatar
Excellent sequel! I loved the first part!